More important information!

Firstly a late post since I said I'd update on weekend, but o well plenty to update.

I had a chat with some people who have read the first couple of chapters and one opinion I got was about the Prologue was that they believed the story was going to be about Shalan's Vengeful spirit. (If you don't know who Shalan is read the prologue which I posted up early in this blog.) Therefore he believed it was a predictable storyline. I have quickly assured him he was wrong and to keep reading.

I have received positive feedback after that, but since he expressed that opinion I thought I would bring it up in case anyone else had that opinion. It does make me wonder if I should change the prologue encase it really does give across that impression too strongly? I'll take it into consideration and wait for some more opinions.

I haven't done as much work on Chapter 5 this week, but when I get chance between my university work I'll continue again as I'm really enjoying writing it and have no intention of stopping.

Meanwhile, here are some more updated title designs I've been working on. New fonts and layout. The first wooden design is actually by Ronald, someone who's been proof reading my story, its nice and clear and stands out much more over the rocky one that I've done. I like the rocky one especially with the new font and its actually pretty clear in when its larger, but once its smaller it becomes unclear. The third one, is a simpler design, again I changed the font and I've actually come to liking it the most so far.



I have also decided that the first few chapters will be released onto my Facebook group page. These will be the fully updated, proof read versions that you would expect to find in the final story. I won't release full versions of the rest of the story as I'll save them for the finished version, but hopefully it'll give those interested a preview and see what they think, hopefully making you want to read the rest.

Here's a link to the Facebook group: https://www.facebook.com/groups/410532333792/

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