Ugh...working Night Shifts at work took it out of me a lot and I've neglected posting anything for a while. Which is pretty bad of me, but I've not stopped, so the important thing is I get on with this.
While I put things together for a better post next time, for now I've been updating a lot of the earlier chapters while I worked through Chapter 7, I found myself amending things slightly to make sure that the decisions that Ayithe makes seem appropriate to who she is. I did this because if I felt like it was't explained properly, then others are going to think the same, therefore it had to be amended.
Granted, it doesn't change the actual story, it just helps make the characters more real, as I'm sure no one wants to read a story and not understand a characters point of view, its frustrating when you see those films on tv and someone does something totally out of character.
So while I get on with those improvements I'm going to prepare my next post, which I'll make more frequent, and the next one will contain a character profile.
