So far I've changed a lot after I really wanted to make this a strong good story. I have added in a new character to help fill in a spot I felt was empty that was important to help express more of Ayithe's personality.
I suppose It would be good of me to give some brief information on some of the characters within the story. I'll give some more information again at another tome but for now:
Ayithe Solete; The Main character, Ayithe is a young beautiful woman who is looking to really make an impact within her profession of being a fighter. Sitting in her families and brothers shadow, she has a lot of weight on her shoulders to impress with her famous family name.
Raine Shallows; Ayithe's best friend growing up. Raine is a herbalist who follows in her parents foot steps as well. However with little to no pressure on what she is doing with her life, Raine is rather relaxed and free. This works well for Ayithe as she knows she doesn't need to compete with Raine and allows them to freely enjoy each others company.
Arckry Solete; Ayithe's older brother. Arckry is a young and promising fighter, having won a junior fighting tournament when he was growing up, and continuing with a polished record he too carries on his families famous name. Having done so well already, he has also proved to be a rock for when Ayithe has needed it, he strives to be the best fighter who Ayithe follows closely.
Dreach Borundis; The main antagonist. Dreach has a lot of famous ties but is unaware of it, however having become aware of some magical powers he possesses he believes himself to be indestructible and therefore better than everyone else. He gets what he wants when he wants, and cares little for other peoples feelings.
Gier Durtun; Ayithe's main rival as they grew up. Gier has a long standing rivalry with Ayithe, growing up they both came up through the ranks within Rium's famous fighting academy. While there is no distinct hate between the two, both have always wanted to be better than the other and this has caused problems between their families.
Bieum Durtun; Giers older brother, and Toltheria's Regional Champion. Famous for being the current regional Champion Bieum is highly skilled with a blade. He believes in true professionalism and honour when it comes to fighting. Having repeatedly been bothered by his young brother Giers fighting with Ayithe, he holds little respect for her.
Descient; A Darkling. A mysterious Darkling of great age, the very creature that any human would run away from in terror. Descient is clever though, and sees more than just killing for food or fun.
Raslin Icewind; A kind young man who is trying to escape from his previous life. While he has done no wrong, he is haunted with under-confidence, and must believe it himself before he can truly be the person he wishes to be.
More to be posted up in future....
