Right now, I'm right at the end of chapter 6, with only 3 more Chapters to go and I'm really excited to get them written as quick as possible as it ties up the reasons why everything has spiralled out of control for Ayithe.
I've spent alot of time writng up notes and pre-writing my story in my note book while on the bus and waiting for work to start, (I have a 2 hour journey to work) this is because I've been unable to reach my PC, but when I have reached it, I could write up my work much faster as I had most of it written up beforehand. So as I reach the end of Chapter 6 I'm going to post up some quotes from the story atm.
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Chapter 4 quote from Ayithe to Gier during an altercation:
"You've always been the same Gier...two faced, arrogant and selfish. I'd never trust you..."
Chapter 2 quote from Descient during Ayithe's Dream:
"You can trust me Ayithe..."
Chapter 6 quote from Ayithe to Raslin:
"I don't know if I believe
in fate Raslin...but I know something...I know I dreamt of you before you saved
me on that ridge...Maybe you were meant to help me, maybe that's your journey,
because I would never have gotten this far without you."
Chapter 5 quote Descient to Ayithe during an altercation:
"If I were going to kill you, I'd have done it by now, you're fear of me is irrational."
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The chapter listings look like this now:
Chapter0: Leaving Home
Chapter1: Broken changed Forever
Chapter2: Descient
Chapter3: Pushed to the Edge
Chapter4: A Lost Soul
Chapter5: The Trust
Chapter6: Intrusion
Chapter7: The Eyes
Chapter8: Death & Betrayal
Chapter9: The Soul
I removed some stuff that structured the story better, and therefore removed a chapter. I did this a little while ago and its much, much better. So as I progress towards the final chapters I'll try give more better updates and get it completed much faster. Expect another update sometime soon.
